my english essay

Yesterday evening, Kar Meng was cycling around the garden with his bicycle. While he was cycling, he saw many beautiful and colourful sunflowers. The sunflowers were very beautiful. When he reached near at the sunflower, he wanted to pluck a sunflower. Suddenly, a bee flew out. Kar Meng had put away his hand from the bicycle. Because of that, the bicycle lost the balanced and fell bown on the ground. Luckily, the bee had flew away and disappeared. "Ouch! It is very hurt", said Kar Meng. He said that he was hurt because his knee fell on yhe small stones. Many of his blood came out from his knee. He was crying because his knee was very hurt.

Ini adalah karangan bahasa inggeris saya di dalam kertas peperiksaan ujian bulanan 3 yang baru sahaja berlalu. Saya mendapat 13 markah per15markah dalam karangan ini.